Elevator Pitch No.4

Again, I took the feedback from my last pitch and applied it to this one. This time I spoke much slower , because last time I went way too fast and I also decided to sit down, because one commenter had mentioned that my camera was moving last time and that I was swaying. I definitely progressed from my first pitch to my last but I still have a lot of learning to do. Im glad these are over now, but I hope I have to do many more in the future.